Farumir's avatar
Welll you don't have to write one so please don't feel pressured. Take your time, trust me I'd write more fanfics if I could but I have a hell of a lot of projects to get through so I'm quite tied down at the moment. :nod:
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I'll write it as soon as possible! Because, I really love your fanfics ^^
And it's ok!
And by the way, I can only see one chapter of 'Syaoran's Substitute', where are the other ones? I can't find them... T.T

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Farumir's avatar
I only ever did two chapters; 'loneliness is colder than snow' and 'Syaoran's substitute', they are the same story just with different titles. Please read the artist comments on them (I always kinda get annoyed when people don't read the artist comments).
MultiSophie1999's avatar
Ok, thank you! :D

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:bulletred:Love is fire that burns without being seen.:bulletred:
:bulletorange:You can't hate yourself, because if you do, no one will love you.:bulletorange:
:bulletyellow:If something bad happens, you have to keep living, you can't always stay on the same place.:bulletyellow:
Farumir's avatar
Don't mention it. It was only a short fanfic I had stuck in my head when I was bored. :)
MultiSophie1999's avatar
looool xD
By the way, can you take a look at my fanfic about SxS?? I don't know if it's good, so I need professional vision xD Could you do that??

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:bulletred:Love is fire that burns without being seen.:bulletred:
:bulletorange:You can't hate yourself, because if you do, no one will love you.:bulletorange:
:bulletyellow:If something bad happens, you have to keep living, you can't always stay on the same place.:bulletyellow:
Farumir's avatar
I read it already, I'm guessing you're gonna add a mature chapter to 'true feelings' too eventually, correct me if I'm wrong? It's great, the only thing I'd say needed a bit of work was the bath scene; there was too much formal description of the undressing, e.g. 'I took off my top, then took off my pants, I then took off my bra, etc' it just seemed to drag on a little (and I don't think Sakura would know was 'asian' means since to her that's Clow World's fashion-sense so her describing her dress as asian-like seems a bit out of character). Other than that it's good; it is very rare to find non-AU TRC SakuraPOV fanfics on the net. :)
MultiSophie1999's avatar
Yes, a little :P
And thank you for the advices! I'll make sure to do the next one better! ^^

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:bulletred:Love is fire that burns without being seen.:bulletred:
:bulletorange:You can't hate yourself, because if you do, no one will love you.:bulletorange:
:bulletyellow:If something bad happens, you have to keep living, you can't always stay on the same place.:bulletyellow:
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