julium's avatar
Hmm... I do understand and appreciate your sincerity. I do agree that the story is bad but this is the less important part of the video. The great point of this is the method: pictograms take the hole of the words. Could be any story and I hope in near future I can tell a good story with this method.
pipherj's avatar
well even at that some of the pictograms are hard to understand, but I do hope you begin to get better using this method. It has potential.
julium's avatar
Thank you very much for your critiques! I'll try to make it better for sure! :)