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I'm Jill so feel free to call me Jill
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Heeheh nice to meet you Jill!^-^ I'm Mobin.:love:
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nice to meet you Mobin! I just wrote a poem for school loosely based on my feelings for Michael 
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Haaha! A poem? Oh I bet it's good! Can I read?:love:
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I had to be general as I'll be reading it to my class but the guy is Michael

When I looked into your eyes

My heart began to fly

This feeling is nothing new

I get it whenever I look at you

The closer you get

The more my palms being to sweat

And every step you take with your feet

The louder and faster my heart beats

They say this feeling is called love

And it feels like I’m a flying dove

And then you walk to me with a smile

And my hearts beating like I just ran three miles

Just then you say hi to me

And my breathing beings to get heavy

“You look beautiful” is what you said

This made my face turn bright red

You took my hand up in a whim

And all my senses began to dim

To my favorite spot we began to trek

It’s the lake where the setting sun reflects

We sat down on the soft green grass

And we enjoyed each moment pass

Just then you fulfill my sweetest wish

You gave me a soft sweet kiss

Oh how I wish that moment could last forever

For I love it when we are together

Then you put me in a deep embrace

As tears began to stream down my face

You said “Pretty girls like you shouldn't cry”

I said “But I don’t want to say good bye”

Smiling at me softly you looked in my tear filled eyes

You told me “A good dream never dies”

Then the alarm clock began to ring

I woke up to a heart with a sting

No one can understand how I feel

To love a man who is not real

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OMG! OMG! OMG!

Dude! That was the best freaking poem I've ever read in my entire life!!! I totally know how you feel!!! Ahhhh!!!




I'm telling ya, that was the best poem about Mickey, I've ever read! GREAT JOB!!

My favorite part was, "No one can understand how I feel.....To love a man who is not real"
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I know right!?! Thank you so much! I put it all in that poem!
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Haaahaa! You're so awesome!^__^
So cool! You totally should write more poems about Michael!:love:
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