just type kris wilson on DA's search bar and see what I'm talking about. His comics are epic and he uses these characters. You have a good concept and very simple to be honest, I just kinda remembered kris wilson's works when I saw it. 
anyways GOOD JOB!
anyways GOOD JOB! 
wow! yeah, I already saw his works before! He's indeed a genius! Thanks so much, pal.