Comment on SpyroXCynder Night Love by Thunder-Bolt

Great story,but the way you write is just so bland!Reading this was like reading a shopping list.You know,it's not that hard to liven up your language.I know that romance is a hard genre to write,and it's not that easy to make a love story that warms the reader's heart,but come on!Liven it up!Seriously,I almost fell asleep reading this.