Indigo-Ashes's avatar
"Ayu-cha" should be Ayu-chan, and "mopping" should be moping.

That panel where the speech runs from melody into the calender panel, that's clever panelling, and something I wouldn't have thought of! I need to study more.
The-Yuri-Canon's avatar
Thanks for the corrections, I'll fix those right away.

That is called "Not enough room and needing to show who is talking so I'll hope this works." LOL I spend a lot of time arranging the panels and speech in an attempt to get everything to flow and fit nicely. It is one of the benefits of having floating panels. If something needs to be shifted every so slightly I can easily arrange it.

Well, good luck to you and read lots of manga, it helps.

Kat