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Comment on The Locked Door by ~xcarebearx

~traumachamber:icontraumachamber: Jan 24, 2003, 12:15:52 PM
Very good, but really sad too. I know how easy it is to put up walls... in keeping with your metaphor, don't try to just suddenly one day break down the wall, cause it'll be rebuilt before you know it... just slowly chip away at it, and put a nice window in there, so you can see out, but people can still see you. And then, once comfortable, take that wall away, and let everyone in on your little secret, yourself. Believe me, sometimes friends grow closer once they take a peek behind the wall. Good luck, and excellent work here. :) (Smile)

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"It's in my hands, the sky...
So bright, it's burning.
It's for me to decide.
WITH FLAMES,
WE REACH HEAVEN TONIGHT..."
- IN FLAMES "Crawl Through Knives"

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~black-r0se:iconblack-r0se: Jan 24, 2003, 11:52:18 AM
beautiful... yet very sad Hug

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My rhymes are the shit.
~doomit:icondoomit: Jan 24, 2003, 11:56:36 AM
i have to regret ever making the wall for myself
now I see the troubled fate has entered your life
beyond the door, beyond the walls and all the reasons
there's life. However bad, however good. It is.

-doomit

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I AM NOT IN CONTROL!

-Doomit
~traumachamber:icontraumachamber: Jan 24, 2003, 12:15:52 PM
Very good, but really sad too. I know how easy it is to put up walls... in keeping with your metaphor, don't try to just suddenly one day break down the wall, cause it'll be rebuilt before you know it... just slowly chip away at it, and put a nice window in there, so you can see out, but people can still see you. And then, once comfortable, take that wall away, and let everyone in on your little secret, yourself. Believe me, sometimes friends grow closer once they take a peek behind the wall. Good luck, and excellent work here. :) (Smile)

--
"It's in my hands, the sky...
So bright, it's burning.
It's for me to decide.
WITH FLAMES,
WE REACH HEAVEN TONIGHT..."
- IN FLAMES "Crawl Through Knives"
~coldfuzion:iconcoldfuzion: Jan 24, 2003, 12:24:34 PM
sad....really sad....arrr so beside this is a really nice writing... Heart
~drippingblood:icondrippingblood: Jan 24, 2003, 2:00:48 PM
I do love this, kind of sad, but I love sad poetry. but beautiful nonetheless i would like to see how this poem would be if you rewrote it.. or fixed it up. but i love ya Heart
~akashka:iconakashka: Jan 25, 2003, 8:37:40 AM
Jawdrop

ouch that hurts, thats so sad. but so beautiful written !

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Enter the realm...
~d-mon:icond-mon: Jan 25, 2003, 12:08:46 PM
this is beautiful, and i understand
err...wow

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"Satan represents man as just another animal, sometimes better, more often worse than those that walk on all-fours, who, because of his “divine spiritual and intellectual development,” has become the most vicious animal of all!"
~push-:iconpush-: Jan 26, 2003, 11:47:49 AM
this is beautiful caylee, and the way you described it with the emotion and feeling led a path straight to the understanding of the piece, just as ~d-mon said, you have a wonderful way with imagery and feeling in your poetry. I wanted to say thank you for all your beautiful comments on my work, and i'm sorry I haven't been able to catch up with everything. You're awesome, thank you. +fav

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and the earth bends to fill the void.
~justducks:iconjustducks: Jan 30, 2003, 1:16:00 AM
wow...that's awesome...it was beautiful and it's something i can relate to also, so it means more. very nice work. :D (Big Grin)
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