I say! This is some nice story! Though I've always had a hard time with cliffhangers. Though, on the contrary, a cliffhanger is sorta why I'm even here talking about it. But that's a story I don't feel like repeating. Besides, you would probebly fall asleep through half of it.
Not like this story! There's some good stuff for ya! But I simply must ask, are you planning a sequel to this? Cause I simply have to see how Tutis will turn back to his teen state again! O_O