Comment on Foxfire by thundercake
I don't know what a kitsune is but thank you for the detailed critique! 
Oh, it's a Japanese fox spirit. I figured that's what they were since they usually take the form of beautiful women.
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Haha sorry I kind of get carried away with crit on things I like. It's a lot easier for me to crit something I like than something I don't like. Hehe.
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Haha sorry I kind of get carried away with crit on things I like. It's a lot easier for me to crit something I like than something I don't like. Hehe.
I'm the same way.. which is why I like to hear critiques 
thanks for the link! I made these things up for my fantasy world.. they're servants of the moon, sent down to spread moonlight. they're called the phaenir.
thanks for the link! I made these things up for my fantasy world.. they're servants of the moon, sent down to spread moonlight. they're called the phaenir.
Oooh cool! :u I love hearing about original things like that much more than seeing reworkings of the same mythical beast stock, haha. Does your fantasy world have like.. any kind of hum... how to say this.. like stories or other works or anything? Or is it just one of those things that come out of your head slowly?
It's an online RPG, actually [link] It's been running for almost a year now. I don't use any mythical creatures like dragons or fairies, which is why I must invent them 
[link] It's been running for almost a year now. I don't use any mythical creatures like dragons or fairies, which is why I must invent them Oh wow, I didn't know Thorns was so fantasy-oriented. For some reason I thought it was like... strictly realism in a Victorian/steampunk setting or something I don't know haha. I think I'll have to take a closer look at it now, haha.
It's fantasy/steampunk I guess. kinda hard to put it into a specific genre.