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Any suggestions, things you'd like to see more/less of? I'm glad you like it 
But I'm also posting for critiques as well.
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"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
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But I'm also posting for critiques as well.--
"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
Well, in all reality, I like the way it's going! The only thing I'd suggest would be to possibly kill the curse words? They aren't especially necesary and kind of take away from the story a bit. My opinion for what it's worth.
I guess the situation with Justin not having clothes will work out because of what his parents thought he was doing; otherwise, I'm interested to hear how Justin tells everyone what he really is!
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I guess the situation with Justin not having clothes will work out because of what his parents thought he was doing; otherwise, I'm interested to hear how Justin tells everyone what he really is!
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You have a point with the cursing. It's just what I know a kid like Marcus would say though; at my high school, people drop the F-bomb at least once a class period. I'm almost completely desensitized by now 
so sometimes I forget that it's offensive to other people.
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"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
so sometimes I forget that it's offensive to other people.--
"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
One more thing: even if you were screwing someone, wouldn't you remember to put your clothes back on when you finished? 
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"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
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"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
Finally caught up!
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Forced into chains, by obtrusive force
He claims to be king, birthright of blood
Does corruption sink so low, runs thicker than the stink
of the corpses brought forth, by the sword of the king
~ShinZm
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Forced into chains, by obtrusive force
He claims to be king, birthright of blood
Does corruption sink so low, runs thicker than the stink
of the corpses brought forth, by the sword of the king
~ShinZm
So... what do you think? <<Subliminal messaging
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"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
<<Subliminal messaging--
"Several projects currently underway aim to disable every one of the over 20,000 genes in the mouse genome. These ambitious efforts will enhance our understanding of mammalian gene function."
The SICS: [link]
Worthy of a bookcase, and a publisher!
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Forced into chains, by obtrusive force
He claims to be king, birthright of blood
Does corruption sink so low, runs thicker than the stink
of the corpses brought forth, by the sword of the king
~ShinZm
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Forced into chains, by obtrusive force
He claims to be king, birthright of blood
Does corruption sink so low, runs thicker than the stink
of the corpses brought forth, by the sword of the king
~ShinZm
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