Comment on Toko Week Prpt 2 Eyes by WithinOurTemptation

I love how you can tell who was speaking without saying a name. And that's not just because it was Toko Week.

Another two things. Second paragraph: I suggest using "weird yet pretty" or even "weird-but-pretty" eyes instead of that comma. It threw me off. Also, fifth paragraph, you added a "t" to "no", making it "not".

Sorry for critiquing you. You just seem like someone into writing, and I thought I could help, little by little. Just grammatical stuff.