JusticeSoap's avatar
Wow his clothes are extremely well drawn.
However the Pin lines on his Pants are extremely distracting and pull you away from his face. It might work better if they were a Darker Color instead of a brighter one.
ElectricEidolon's avatar
Hm, good point. I share the same regard towards the pinstripes; unfortunately, this is the official "costume" of said character. His pinstripes in the television series are just as bright, haha. Regardless, it's good to take a mental note of the effect brighter stripes have against a darker color within the composition of an image.

Thank you for the comment and critique! MUCH appreciated. :D
JusticeSoap's avatar
No problem, although I feel that I should add that in Comics the artists are supposed to use Lines like that to subconsciously guide the viewers eye around the page.
ElectricEidolon's avatar
Indeed. 'Course, it's one thing to know- and another thing to know how to use it effectively. The latter requires experience which I've not acquired, yet. But, hey, that's the purpose of practice! :]
JusticeSoap's avatar
Yeah thats my main problem.
I know a bunch of stuff and can reconise most things at a glance.
However in practice i am find it difficult to apply my knowlidge.