Don't be sorry at all! This really helps me a lot. I'll be sure to put in more for the setting, I did feel it was lacking but I really wanted to get the story out. I'll have to look into famous buildings and such since I've never been to Manhattan XD //lives on the other side of the country// I can certainly work that in to the next chapter.
I do XD I defiantly had to rethink a scene in my head after reading a story that very slightly used the same idea. [It was still too close for me] So Yeah, hopefully that plot stunt doesn't lose people XD
I do't listen to many Gaga songs so I didn't even know that song existed XD I'll be sure to listen to it.
I did? I'll be sure to try to mix it up next time. I, being the lazy person I am, will probably just leave it for now. :]
Like I said in the beginning of this post, don't be sorry! I hadn't had a good crit yet so I really didn't know how good this story was at all. This is a HUGE help for me. //hugs// Thank you :]
I do XD I defiantly had to rethink a scene in my head after reading a story that very slightly used the same idea. [It was still too close for me] So Yeah, hopefully that plot stunt doesn't lose people XD
I do't listen to many Gaga songs so I didn't even know that song existed XD I'll be sure to listen to it.
I did? I'll be sure to try to mix it up next time. I, being the lazy person I am, will probably just leave it for now. :]
Like I said in the beginning of this post, don't be sorry! I hadn't had a good crit yet so I really didn't know how good this story was at all. This is a HUGE help for me. //hugs// Thank you :]
For the record, I had to look rly hard to find any complaints! But I know the feeling, the little annoying plot bunny’s gnawing on your brainstem. you just have to write!
cool, It's not to hard btw, if you own prototype you can just take Alex out and pick one. then check where you were on the map and look it up online. that’s what I do~ //since I don’t even live in the right country//
But yha just aimless suggestions~
Omg I hate it when that happens.. it worse when you already written it to.. XP well what can you do? great minds think alike.. sadly..
Gha yha I’m just a gaga nerd like that.. sry~
Don’t worry I do it all that time! I totally overused the word novice just yesterday! it’s fine. Like I sied I was looking for stuff to criticize.
not at all glad I could help in my own lame way..
cool, It's not to hard btw, if you own prototype you can just take Alex out and pick one. then check where you were on the map and look it up online. that’s what I do~ //since I don’t even live in the right country//
But yha just aimless suggestions~
Omg I hate it when that happens.. it worse when you already written it to.. XP well what can you do? great minds think alike.. sadly..
Gha yha I’m just a gaga nerd like that.. sry~
Don’t worry I do it all that time! I totally overused the word novice just yesterday! it’s fine. Like I sied I was looking for stuff to criticize.
not at all glad I could help in my own lame way..
Well, I'm glad there wasn't and OBVIOUS things to complain about. :]
Yeah. Pretty bad bunnies D: I think I'm currently hostage in my own brain from the little buggers D;
And you know, that's a great idea! //looks where some of the apartments are in Prototypw// :'D /fail
Indeed. Indeed XD Oh well, people will just have to DEAL.
Yeah. I hate overusing words, I really try not to XD [I really had that problem in Chapter 2] But yeah, I'll try to finish CH 2 asasp but I don't know how much I can get done over this week end, lots of school stuff :<
Yeah. Pretty bad bunnies D: I think I'm currently hostage in my own brain from the little buggers D;
And you know, that's a great idea! //looks where some of the apartments are in Prototypw// :'D /fail
Indeed. Indeed XD Oh well, people will just have to DEAL.
Yeah. I hate overusing words, I really try not to XD [I really had that problem in Chapter 2] But yeah, I'll try to finish CH 2 asasp but I don't know how much I can get done over this week end, lots of school stuff :<
Nope like I sied it’s pretty smooth all around, like a well paved roadway.
Indeed
evil bunnys..
Hehe ops..
I was under the impression that the game was vary heavy based off of Manhattan. at least all the important parts. (for the recond I only did this for central park so the rest of the city may not be as close to the real thing)
well on the bright side it forces you to come up with more original plot line.
no need to rush, god knows I’m no Steven king either. not all of us can live to be the prolific just take it at your own pace.
Indeed
evil bunnys.. Hehe ops..
I was under the impression that the game was vary heavy based off of Manhattan. at least all the important parts. (for the recond I only did this for central park so the rest of the city may not be as close to the real thing) well on the bright side it forces you to come up with more original plot line.
no need to rush, god knows I’m no Steven king either. not all of us can live to be the prolific just take it at your own pace.
Yeah, I don't really know how well based off of the real city it is XD I'll figure it out :>
Indeed XD I'm sure it'll be very original. God help me if some one else comes up with it XD
Yeah. :]
Indeed XD I'm sure it'll be very original. God help me if some one else comes up with it XD
Yeah. :]