lol!
Hey you were right about the chest thing I think so I change it. I uploaded the new version, probably only you will know the difference. Thanks though, I belive you helped make this pic better!
its not just that his face its enlongated to the extent that it looks femenin. u know? sorry not tryin to pop your efforts i just for got to mention that if the jaw were more square that might help.... 
Yeah I know how to draw guy faces it's just I tried to copy my friends style and this is just how it turned out, I guess I'm not very good at it. I'm much better at drawing more realistic looking people but she has a cartoon/anime style.
ive the same problem copying styles