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Comment on Turn to Sand by ~bluenine

Wow, this is so cool. It makes me think of that guy in the movie 'The Mummy'. A guy staggering to the desert and falling to his knees. This poem has great imagery and description, it actually put me there. That's always good. Great job! *fav*
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I don't have any clue what to write about this.
I think that I will leave myself in the mystery intended and not ask what your inspiration for this poem was. I do it to everyone with my poetry.

This is so incredible.
I feel like this whenever I'm alone.
During the weeks when She's not around...
I return to sorrow.
Worried


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I forgot to tell you that this too, is a favorite.


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wow, that's really powerful. gave me a really sinking feeling... hard to describe. *fav*
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again i love the imagery, but it seems so sad... i dont know what to say about it...
beautiful alex.
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>woody
Wow, this is so cool. It makes me think of that guy in the movie 'The Mummy'. A guy staggering to the desert and falling to his knees. This poem has great imagery and description, it actually put me there. That's always good. Great job! *fav*
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nAww ahx01
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Just the vivid imagery is enough to classify this as an amazing poem. You always seem to coincide images with words very well and this poem is a prime example. The whole concept of sand and being overcome with it's dryness is profound enough. Keep writing..you do it better than most people..or poets that I know.
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