The reason why it had "Contortion" in the title was that Sally originally thought she only did contortion, plus a little bit more. The compression was the major part of it, as it not only linked contortion and elasticity, but it was what caused the two to become interested in each other.
I think I have read that story once or twice in the past, and I may have gotten the spark for the idea of this one, but that one was primarily about contortion rather than linking contortion to elasticity.
I think I have read that story once or twice in the past, and I may have gotten the spark for the idea of this one, but that one was primarily about contortion rather than linking contortion to elasticity.
Good one. I enjoyed reading it quite a lot. I like when the impossible girl (i mean, the fiction part) gets to show off her skills in front of regular humans.
To add, at the end, you mistakenly name Sally as Sarah
To add, at the end, you mistakenly name Sally as Sarah
As i had say, you had made a new story only the beginning reminds me to this other story, maybe you should do more changes and nobody can see where your idea is from. Good luck for the future.