Comment on Ivory by vendixnosferatu
lol youre more than free to act upon them 
Really?? May I write a story using her? I can use any information you would like for me to use (like names and background/history) and where you would like for the story to go and I can write it for you! :iconexcitedonionplz:
lol i'll tell you what i remember...
her name is sylfaen...
And she controls aura...sort of like maisma that emits from her hands that burns people like acid....she can also heal stuff with it too...i dont remember a thing about how she got to be with hellsing...wait, its coming to me...i think she was learning from her father/grandfather (dont remember which one) to control it, and she got involved in the military somehow... i think thats about all i remember. Nothing comes to me about why she was there, whats going on, or why she was working with hellsing, i'll give you artistic freedom on that...
her name is sylfaen...
And she controls aura...sort of like maisma that emits from her hands that burns people like acid....she can also heal stuff with it too...i dont remember a thing about how she got to be with hellsing...wait, its coming to me...i think she was learning from her father/grandfather (dont remember which one) to control it, and she got involved in the military somehow... i think thats about all i remember. Nothing comes to me about why she was there, whats going on, or why she was working with hellsing, i'll give you artistic freedom on that...
Any specific details you would like added? Like hair/eye color, personality? And was it an inteded romance with a character?
Sorry for all the questions, but I don't want it to stray too far from your original ideas.
Sorry for all the questions, but I don't want it to stray too far from your original ideas.
ahh...i think her hair was a dark auburn...sort of like a mix between a dark and a chocolate brown. And her eyes were a vivid blue/green if remember correctly... at the time when i made her, her intended was alucard, but now that i look back on it, i think it would be much better this time around if she wasnt looking for his love, but for his acceptance, his friendship. Since he's such a gifted kiler, i would think she wishes to impress him, to be on equal grounds with him, to show to him hat shes able to handle her own, and not to depend on others to save her own life...
sorry if thats too ambigous
i think that ways much better from what i originally did for her, its much more interesting. its okay if characters trip and fall sometimes, runnng forward on the path of thier lives, making decisions that will change them. Allow the characters to lead you, as they make thier own ways, make mistakes and keep moving forward.
sorry if thats too ambigous
i think that ways much better from what i originally did for her, its much more interesting. its okay if characters trip and fall sometimes, runnng forward on the path of thier lives, making decisions that will change them. Allow the characters to lead you, as they make thier own ways, make mistakes and keep moving forward.I can do that, or I can do my best to. ^-^ I thing it's a wonderful idea to make her like that. There's too many fics out there, where Alucard is like a crutch for a helpless OC. (I'm kinda guilty of that, but I try not to. >_>)
And what about the wings, and seals on her hands? Are they decoration, or is there a specific reason behind them, like a family seal/way of harnessing her power? And was she learning to fight monsters, kinda like the Hellsing family?
And what about the wings, and seals on her hands? Are they decoration, or is there a specific reason behind them, like a family seal/way of harnessing her power? And was she learning to fight monsters, kinda like the Hellsing family?
the seals allow her to release the miasma, if they werent there, she wouldnt be able to, and they were tatooed onto her hands when she was very young, probably by her father and the winnds are mechanical, put on her by her father to 'bring her closer to god' due to her maisma, which was coursebyev e ryone ay everyone around her. she cant fly with them though. she wishes she could and spends long hours gazing at the sky, sighing. yeah, she grew up learnig to fight monsters, she had to because it was expected of her becasue she had the power to.
You can ignore the last question... Here's a small sample of what I might do with the story, if you want to check it out and see if you're okay with it. I hope it's decent enough!
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Here's a small sample of what I might do with the story, if you want to check it out and see if you're okay with it. I hope it's decent enough![link]
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Alright, these should be the last few questions, sorry for asking so many!!
What's her religion, skin tone, race, country of origin, last name, main outfit/uniform colors? Is this set in the actual story line, or before, or after? And is her hair short in the back with longer strands in the front?
Also, would you like a prologue to see if I have things going on the right track, and to see if things need to be straightened out?
What's her religion, skin tone, race, country of origin, last name, main outfit/uniform colors? Is this set in the actual story line, or before, or after? And is her hair short in the back with longer strands in the front?
Also, would you like a prologue to see if I have things going on the right track, and to see if things need to be straightened out?