An excellent drawing; you've asked for an advanced critique, but there isn't anything I can observe that needs adjusting. Her outfit is great, she looks properly proportioned and the clock theme is awesome.
One extremely minor suggestion:
You could lower her left ear (left, from her perspective) just a tad.
thanks for paying attention to the critique message, not many people do ^^U in fact, i think i lost my sight from that ear with all those details, thanks to point it out ^^U and in fact i think i lost a little perspective, it was'nt intentional than one foot is a little more moved forward than the other ^^U
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One extremely minor suggestion:
You could lower her left ear (left, from her perspective) just a tad.
Other than that, superb drawing.
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