Comment on Groudon Report by Mutitus
Some errors:
First paragraph:
is as(a) legendary Ground-type Pokemon
is(in) a beacon of Harsh Sunlight.
because once this creature start(starts) to regain
Third paragraph:
It’s(its) control over the land is so great
but it is a among the most powerful of Ground-type attacks
(There is an extra a)
Fourth paragraph:
its Drought Ability is upgrade(upgraded) to the cataclysmic Desolate Land Ability
bringer of a drowned apocalypse
(This bit just feels somewhat off to me. Not really an error.)
Fifth paragraph:
managed to eventually awaken the might(mighty) beast with
(I also recommend specifying how 'recent' such events are. While 10 years is technically recent, it simply exacerbates the thinking that the Magma/Aqua incident occured as recently as a few months ago in-universe.)
Last paragraph:
unrivaled in on and within the land.
(in is not necessary)
All good.
First paragraph:
is as(a) legendary Ground-type Pokemon
is(in) a beacon of Harsh Sunlight.
because once this creature start(starts) to regain
Third paragraph:
It’s(its) control over the land is so great
but it is a among the most powerful of Ground-type attacks
(There is an extra a)
Fourth paragraph:
its Drought Ability is upgrade(upgraded) to the cataclysmic Desolate Land Ability
bringer of a drowned apocalypse
(This bit just feels somewhat off to me. Not really an error.)
Fifth paragraph:
managed to eventually awaken the might(mighty) beast with
(I also recommend specifying how 'recent' such events are. While 10 years is technically recent, it simply exacerbates the thinking that the Magma/Aqua incident occured as recently as a few months ago in-universe.)
Last paragraph:
unrivaled in on and within the land.
(in is not necessary)
All good.
Fixed.
The time-sensitive information issue comes from the fact that, for most of the history of the series, Japan has been getting the games sooner than everyone else, so the exact timing of events in-game and in the movies differs. That, and I am trying to avoid exact dates for the moment because Game Freak really seems to be trying to tie ORAS in with X and Y, even though the events of ORAS (in my composite canon) happened that long ago. It's my buffer against whatever bizarre tricks Game Freak pulls on us with the next games.
The time-sensitive information issue comes from the fact that, for most of the history of the series, Japan has been getting the games sooner than everyone else, so the exact timing of events in-game and in the movies differs. That, and I am trying to avoid exact dates for the moment because Game Freak really seems to be trying to tie ORAS in with X and Y, even though the events of ORAS (in my composite canon) happened that long ago. It's my buffer against whatever bizarre tricks Game Freak pulls on us with the next games.
Oh, and something I wish to ask:
What of Emerald?
What of Emerald?
..............Sigh....yes, Emerald...
Unfortunately, Emerald...
My job is to keep things current, and in doing so, I had to create a composite cannon so both Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire...and the events of Emerald sort of got eked out, I'm afraid. It was a bold move, but with the Delta Incident, there wasn't any way I could contain all of this...
Unfortunately, Emerald...
My job is to keep things current, and in doing so, I had to create a composite cannon so both Omega Ruby and Alpha Sapphire...and the events of Emerald sort of got eked out, I'm afraid. It was a bold move, but with the Delta Incident, there wasn't any way I could contain all of this...
I see.
Unfortunate, to tell the truth. Let us hope that Platinum does not suffer the same fate.
Unfortunate, to tell the truth. Let us hope that Platinum does not suffer the same fate.
Considering that Emerald had a very loyal fan base, and that Platinum's is so much larger...
Yeah, they had better not. Or there will be riots.
Yeah, they had better not. Or there will be riots.
Maybe be a bit more specific, but not too specific?
Yeah, I probably will make some corrections, but I have a load of work for school about to hit me, so it might not be changed for some time.
No worries.