Comment on Pokemon Gijinka Dump 23 by BlueRoseArkelle
I'm giving long feedback again
First out of all, I also like Kyogre. A lot. He looks like Genesis! He really does. I like the sleeves and the button, and the way you colored the coat
Mismagius looks really neat. I like the zipper a lot, and I just love purple...
And considering how sensitive I'm to fanservice and everything, I'm really surprised to say that I like this Seviper the best (I also like the Pokemon) out of this bunch. I think she's really beautiful, I love the way you used black, and I think that all her details are excellent
Ah, Snorunt! It's such a cute Pokemon^^ I like the colors you used for her. And her poncho/cape is really cute! Her left arms looks a bit funny, though. Kind of stiff to me.
This Spiritomb doesn't look like my type of a girl, but I like her anyways. Her shirt is really cool, and I like the details of her eyes^^
Illumise is fine, but not one of my favorites as a Pokemon. I like the upper part of her outfit really much (collar and buttons
) Her socks and shoes are neat, too. And you colored her hair so beautifully...!
I like Quins hair. He also sounds like a funny character XD I think he's the most well-drawn character out of this bunch.
Eeh, I love Finneon and Lumineon... Farina is so cute Her hair is really pretty, and I love the tiny butterflies on her anklets... Maybe it's just me, but her dress could use a few wrinkles.
How old are your OCs here, by the way...?
First out of all, I also like Kyogre. A lot. He looks like Genesis! He really does. I like the sleeves and the button, and the way you colored the coat
Mismagius looks really neat. I like the zipper a lot, and I just love purple...
And considering how sensitive I'm to fanservice and everything, I'm really surprised to say that I like this Seviper the best (I also like the Pokemon) out of this bunch. I think she's really beautiful, I love the way you used black, and I think that all her details are excellent
Ah, Snorunt! It's such a cute Pokemon^^ I like the colors you used for her. And her poncho/cape is really cute! Her left arms looks a bit funny, though. Kind of stiff to me.
This Spiritomb doesn't look like my type of a girl, but I like her anyways. Her shirt is really cool, and I like the details of her eyes^^
Illumise is fine, but not one of my favorites as a Pokemon. I like the upper part of her outfit really much (collar and buttons
) Her socks and shoes are neat, too. And you colored her hair so beautifully...!I like Quins hair. He also sounds like a funny character XD I think he's the most well-drawn character out of this bunch.
Eeh, I love Finneon and Lumineon... Farina is so cute
Her hair is really pretty, and I love the tiny butterflies on her anklets... Maybe it's just me, but her dress could use a few wrinkles.How old are your OCs here, by the way...?
; w; Thanks for the feedback again!~ ♥
; u; Yeah, I agree that Snorunt's arm looks a bit stiff. xD I actually sort of did that on purpose, because more serious type characters tend to carry themselves more stiffly than others. xD
; u; And yeah, Farina's dress should have a few more wrinkles, but other than the sleeves, her dress is really tight, sort of like a stretch-polyester type of material, which if you have ever worn it, it refuses to wrinkle. xD lol
xD Oh, lol I allways forget to say what their ages are. lol
Farina and Iliana are 16, though Iliana is shorter and less developed than Farina. Quin is 18, xD though he usually seems older because he is actually like, 6 feet tall. xD lol~
; u; Yeah, I agree that Snorunt's arm looks a bit stiff. xD I actually sort of did that on purpose, because more serious type characters tend to carry themselves more stiffly than others. xD
; u; And yeah, Farina's dress should have a few more wrinkles, but other than the sleeves, her dress is really tight, sort of like a stretch-polyester type of material, which if you have ever worn it, it refuses to wrinkle. xD lol
xD Oh, lol I allways forget to say what their ages are. lol
Farina and Iliana are 16, though Iliana is shorter and less developed than Farina. Quin is 18, xD though he usually seems older because he is actually like, 6 feet tall. xD lol~
Anytime
Her left arm looks still unrealistically stiff to me the right arm is fine, though.
I know, but i still think there should be ac ouple of wrinkles around her waits or something
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Her left arm looks still unrealistically stiff to me
the right arm is fine, though.I know, but i still think there should be ac ouple of wrinkles around her waits or something
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