Comment on A Life Lesson on How to Live by SugarCoveredDreams

-I got the feeling of a lesson right away, so you don't have to worry about that ^_^

-The ending seems just a little abrupt, but the actual content isn't a problem. I think that you just need a little bit more leading up to the final sentence as it seems to almost cut off mid-thought. So yes, I would recomend expanding on the final bit just a little. It's very well thought out, otherwise.