Deus-Nocte's avatar
I suppose I wouldn't mind sending it.. but I wouldn't really have the time to edit much of it, so there might be plotholes/grammatical errors/etc. XD But... it's also really long, and Primus doesn't come into the story until our last two big arcs. So as long as you're cool with that. There are a ton a characters and a loooot of romance, but we also have actual plot and arcs we go through. The story kind of changes main characters as you go along. So as long as you don't mind that, I can start preparing chapters. The beginning will take more explaining, however, since our very first RP session didn't save D: If you're really only interested in Primus, I can skip to his arc and I can try to explain the basics of what happened thus far and the characters. It's up to you though.

Aw, well thanks! I plan to be posting more art on it and the actual first chapter soon, so I'd love any comments on it when I do. :) I actually used a few of my TF OCs in it, I just made them into their own characters, which I find I'm happier with anyway.

Unfortunately the idea of doing it over skype isn't appealing to me, simply because I have a speech impediment :/ I wouldn't be able to do much with actually talking... my main style is doing it in IM in story format. Like you type your post as you would a story. I can't really go back to something like the chat version anymore. XD

I actually really like Prime. I didn't think I'd warm up to it, but I really did. The prospect that it might be based on the movies turned me off, but I think the designs are actually a lot closer to Animated... only 3D. And the writing is really great too. I really loved TFA, but it didn't pick up until the end of first season; this one they caught my interest from the get go, so it's nice. How about you?
Laserbot's avatar
COOL! thanks so much i cant wait to read all of it! I am not a gramar nazi so it wont bug me one bit and i love to read for myself whats happening im never afraid of a long read if anything it helps me pass by the time when im not working. If you like to still give me the first parts summary that was not logged thats fine with me it probably help me understand the setting and all that too!

and hey dont worry about it i never talk out RPG's either i just like using Skypes IM and then sometimes ocasionaly what we could do on there is talk about other miscilaneious stuff or where to go next/ brainstorm while we RPG using the mikes but its all optional.

the other thing thats nice on skype is you can have multiple chat windows open with the same person/s so for example one chat room could be for all OOC talk and the other window could be for Incharacter RPG story and its verry easy to switch back and forth. and i so it exactly the same way we will post big chunks of story we may have our own characters we like to focus on but we are flexable with the otehr person playing eachothers characters for the sake of story development and plot because most of the time were on the same page of where the RPG is going or a general goal to reach.

I realy dig the Prime series the stories and overall plot of it all is quite well written and told from and animation standpoint. even the 3D animation this time aorund i like. the character design at first i had to get a little used to being certian characters lacking facial featurs that bugged me but over time i kinda like the idea of them looking the way they do being they are aliens so it makes sence. also they have realy paied mind to give the fans what they want with focus eps on spacific characters and even some without the human element entirely, as well as some focused on interactions between humanity and the TF's. I think what i like alot too is how they have taken concepts usualy only used in the comics and thrown them into the cartoon. like the idea of Mech. a human oposition thats more of a secret organization. this is realy similar to what IDW has done. and the kids for the most part are not anoying... even Miko i can tollerate as the comic releif. without her banter here and there i think the story probably be too serious.

but look at me rambling on and on haha you get the idea XD.
Deus-Nocte's avatar
Alright then, I'll try to get it to you soon! Probably through e-mail. I can't say it'll be super soon that you'll get the first part, probably in a week or two. Right now I'm kind of crammed for time, but hopefully that'll lessen up then.

Oh, Skype must've added that feature while I haven't been using it, haha! That does sound pretty useful. It's nice to have a separate window for OOC tangents and whatnot.

Yeah, definitely agree with you there. The faces kinda bugged me at first too, but like you, I've grown used to it. I also like how they make every bot's optics different... makes them more individual than just having the same ones for each faction. :) The humans I can pretty much stand, too. At first I didn't like Miko, but yeah, her presence is needed in a situation like this~

Haha, it's okay! The convo's winding down anyway :)