Jacktoon's avatar
I think you mean Smugleaf :iconsmugleafplz:
*shot*
Another quality icon though. You're pretty good at these things. The consistent style makes them easily identifiable as your work.
Although to me the lettering looks more like "Smivy"; it might just be my eyes though *blinks a few times*
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I think it is just your eyes =P Lol. Though seriously, I can't make out an 'm', and I'd fix it if I thought I'd have to. I'm not happy with the colouring of the font, though, it's a bit dark for my liking, but I have to keep it that colour because the colour is the same as Snivy's, and less colour = less data used. I have, however, fixed that annoying little pixel on top of his nose and got his legs going :D Just for fun.

NONOTSMUGLEAF.
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Oh well, then. I can definately see a twinge of "m" there, but it may be due to it's close proximity to the "i" that makes it look like it has an extra edge. Either way, I know that writing letters like m/n are really difficult with pixels. I mean, I know it's an "n", but then there are moments where it looked a bit m-ified. Lawls. But yeah, maybe it's just the colour. It's a tad hard to see. Even if you had to keep everything the same colour as Snivy couldn't you have shifted the colours a little further to white?
Lolol this is probably sounding really nitpicky now :XD: I just think it's important that little things like logos are actually readable. It's odd how you do a great job with the little Poké-sprites since they're even smaller, yet really easy to make out what they are.
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If I shifted the colour (and not to white, that'd just make it paler; I'd want it more saturated) then I'd have to do the exact same to Snivy, and I'm very particular about the colours I use on the sprites. And I've got the highest range available chosen from Snivy on the lettering. I wish I could make it lighter, though. Rly!
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Oh, good point. I just thought white because it'd be clearer to see against the black. It'd probably have made more sense if I'd just said "brighter". But yeah, since the Snivy's fine I can see why you wouldn't change it. I suppose I'm just being overly critical.
Because,
like,
it still looks like an "m" :trollface: *shot*
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OuO Lol, you know, I find it hard to believe you would willingly use a trollface. Doesn't seem like you :D Oh well! I suppose there are more important things to worry about. Like that deviation you've got uploaded :) I'm definitely going to get around to that, don't you worry. It's just slagging critiquing art is kind of tiring, and I need my strength for this week o_o Seriously. I'm not lifting a finger.
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Lol well duh, of course you're not lifting a finger; you're lifting many, of which you required to type that previous message. =p
And obviously the trollface was just a joke.
Or was it?
:icontrollfaceplz:
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