Meliadhor's avatar
OpenEnding: Hehe, now a ending-proper would be really nice but then again open-ending is well... it basically means that the story goes on somewhere so I don't have to worry about reading something sad... heh, does that make sense? And semesteee... OH DAMN, IT'S MAY ALREADY!? I need to write the 1st chapter of my MA thesiiiissss godsdammiiitttt...

ADHD: Ahh so it's pretty much as I imagined it is :3 So, logically, if Dash was to ever capture Pinkie and force the Element back into her she would be 'cured'? Or at least she would have a lot to think about then... Now that would be nasty, suddenly realising you've been a monster-evil-mastermind-turned-friends-into-robots kind of a pony.

Oddly enough, the newest MLP episode, you saw it? makes your fanfic more believable. With Pinkie being so bipolar - that would explain why she'd think it's a good idea to extract the Element... Still, I'd love to know how she did it ;) and if a sack of flour in a hat was involved. And whatsoever happened to Gummy?

Elements, do go on, I love soul-related talks! ....especially how I'm always checking if people would sell their very own living soul for a choco-chip cookies. They would and some even did.

On a completely unrelated notice, I was reading your stuff while listening to a few tracks from the TaleSpin cartoon OST, that old D*sney thing. I think they were quite fitting to the Evil Pinkie parts :3

Again, a really good fanfic there - made me think more than once afterwards of the fates of Evil Pinkie & her robot retinue!
ShadeRyuInari's avatar
Yes, the new episode was great wasn't it? And yes, it is indeed May. I'm preparing for my final paper myself, then I get to go off and take maths over the summer. Fuuun =D XD

Yes, the story goes on somewhere, and you don't have to worry about reading something sad (Though I would recommend checking out my story Trix and Stones. It's one of my favourite pieces of writing, though it is rather sad.) As for curing Pinkie Pie, it wouldn't be as simple as just putting the element back into her. It would merely turn her back to what she was before (Though possibly a little dejected once she realizes what she did to her friends and Equestria). It wouldn't pose a cure for her insanity or megalomania. If you were to 'cure' Pinkie Pie you'd have to treat the source of the problem, not just the symptoms. Forcing the element back into her would only delay her striking again, and possibly even give her an excuse to strike unnoticed again.

Now for the element talk. Basically the way I see the elements of Harmony is they are a part of the pony's soul. Every pony has some of each in them, but they're usually in such small amounts that extracting them would not be profitable for long-running power. The bearers, however, each hold so much of that particular element that it possesses the potential for infinite power in each one. A good example from the Sonic Verse would be Chaos Shards vs Chaos Emeralds. Both hold enormous power but the Emeralds are much more worth your time for large-scale grand schemes. Another thing is in the average pony you could extract the element that they were strongest with and they'd feel little to no discomfort, and only minor personality changes. For the bearers it's almost like tearing out a kidney. It won't kill them (We are going to use the assumption that the person losing the kidney doesn't die from disease or blood loss) and they can live without it but having lost it there's going to be some damage and it's not going to be pleasant.

As for personality changes they would be from most radical to least radical:

Pinkie Pie- Doesn't feel the urge to party, laugh, or be random. She thinks much more clearly and from her darker side she has developed a severe case of Megalomania.

Rainbow Dash- Without her element of Loyalty she wouldn't see the need to really even HAVE friends. They just bring her down, and she could shine better if she either flew solo or used them to her own means.

Fluttershy- Though she probably would still be shy she would get more brash. I always imagined Fluttershy's shyness to be a combination of her wanting to be kind to everpony as well as a lack of confidence. Without the strong desire to be kind to everypony her comments might be a lot more sharp, and she might actually start to be more brash by putting other ponies down to build her own self-confidence.

Applejack- Not so much of a severe change in personality here, but I'd imagine that Applejack would get somewhat more greedy, and definitely more dishonest. However, unlike the previous three she would still be very caring towards her friends, and possibly even tell the truth to them. I don't think she would wind up as a Pathological lier, but she would most certainly lie more often.

Rarity-Again not so much as some of the other ponies. Mostly I think she would be more greedy (Far more greedy than Applejack) and stop giving away favours, such as sales, or making dresses for her friends.

Twilight Sparkle- Hardly any personality change at all, if anything she would loose a little confidence. However the thing that would be certain is she would no longer be as competent at magic as she used to be. I would think of it as a sort of cripple. Using myself as an example, I lost my hand but it was sewn back on and healed (Rather well thank goodness) but I'm not as competent with it and the things I did with it as I was before. Twilight's magic would be the same thing, without her element of Magic she's just another regular Pony with about as much power as, say, Trixie (Probably a bit more than Trixie but you get the picture)

And that's my sepal on the elements. Also TaleSpin rocks.
Meliadhor's avatar
Gargl, gotta learn to go to sleep earlier than 3am.. oooh wait it's 2:40 so it's OK...

Turning back - so, instead of imprisonment for her crimes she'd be treated as 'ill' and would regain her friends, just that they'd watch here a bit more carefully and would make sure she takes her meds every now and then? I wonder if there's some version of the Arkham Mental Institute for ponies? Especially when considering the newest episode, she already seems a bit 'special' in her own unique way, with her little breakdown and delusions...

Trix & Stones = sad? Hmm... well, I like sad stories, in a semi-masochistic way so I guess I'll read it in about... 18 hrs or so, maybe a day. Just finished reading Elements of Discord which had a nice (sad nice) piece with a young pony being unable to comprehend why the bigger pony won't get up again. It takes a while to put all that stuff in order in one's brain...

As for Elements & personality - yes, I think I can understand that.

Again, you know you've read a good story when your mind can't decide whether to hope for the sequel or not. I have never read the last book from one old fantasy series just because I didn't want the story to have an end - here I have a similar situation. ;)