Drako013's avatar
Speaking of talking normally, I enjoyed your expert use of schizophasia with Derpy. The whole time reading it I was conflicted between sorrow of her condition and D'awwwww because of how much cuter she would sound like that. Anyway, it was well done and the slow progression back to normal when she was with Rainbow Dash felt natural.
Solaris90's avatar
Thank you. ^_^ I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic as much as you've enjoyed it so far.