You are most welcome my friend! I just finished the rest of the chapters and I loved it! -continues to read your SP stories- Oh, and I added you to my watch list, so I cannot wait for an update for any stories of yours!
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story! And thanks for the Watch!
You're welcome! And your stories are very detailed and so in character. Unlike most stories where Stan and Kyle, are like "Dude, I love you, let's go screw in my room like rabbits." and even Cartman and Kenny are out of character too, in one story I read forever ago, Cartman was jealous or something of Stan and tried to murder him and somehow that would get Kyle to love him? It was awful and had no point, but yet people still loved it. Made no sense to me. Your stories are nicely written out and make sense.
Well, I can see Cartman acting psychotic enough to actually attempt that (think about the Scott Pilgrim Must Die episode) but I think it would have to be treated with such a way that Kyle would never be with Cartman and that the author made the point to show how twisted Cartman's plan was. It would be a very interesting character study. Perhaps see Cartman go through a transformation of sorts.
And thank you again for the lovely compliments on my stories.
Also your avatar is cute. It's Zorua from Pokemon Black & White, right?
And thank you again for the lovely compliments on my stories.
Also your avatar is cute. It's Zorua from Pokemon Black & White, right?
Yea same here with Cartman being psychotic. I guess I didn't really understand why the author would do that to Cartman's character, but I guess that you explained it, it makes sense now.
You are most welcome, you deserve those compliments; writing and reading is something that I do and is basically my life haha. I need to learn how to use descriptive words within my own stories and many more things that will catch other readers' attention.
Haha, yup, that Zorua, he's so adorable. <3
You are most welcome, you deserve those compliments; writing and reading is something that I do and is basically my life haha. I need to learn how to use descriptive words within my own stories and many more things that will catch other readers' attention.
Haha, yup, that Zorua, he's so adorable. <3
You can do it! Just practice, practice! That's why I write fan fics cause it's fun practice.
And Zorua is adorable. I personally love Litwick. He's so cute! XD
And Zorua is adorable. I personally love Litwick. He's so cute! XD
I do type some fan fics, because I cannot draw to save my life, so I do type a lot haha. I'm currently still working on Bite of the Beast, a South Park fanfiction, it's for a dear friend of mine from school, she loves Damien and Kyle together, dunno why. I guess she saw the South Park episode of Christmas Critters -that episode traumatized me for life XD- and when Kyle went all demon or whatever, she thought they paired up with each other. Sadly I do not know enough of Damien to get a hold of his character and when seeing more episodes with Kyle in them, I feel as if I messed up on his character too. 
I also have made up my own characters named Alexander James Hale and Mason Stewart Owens. They have their own little spot haha.
The little trickster is adorable! And Litwick is adorable too! I love the purpleish wax that looks like hair that covers its right eye hehehe.
I also have made up my own characters named Alexander James Hale and Mason Stewart Owens. They have their own little spot haha.The little trickster is adorable! And Litwick is adorable too! I love the purpleish wax that looks like hair that covers its right eye hehehe.
Well I guess Damien would be hard to write about cause he only appears in one episode. Though it's implied he wants attention. That's why he burns Pip, so that the other boys like him. It's also mentioned that 'Damien moves around a lot because of his dad' which kind of also hints at his unstable home life which contributes to his need for attention. Then given how childish Satan acts in South Park we can get this sense that Damien has a similar situation to Stan in that he too has an embarrassing father. You could totally play off that. As for the Kyle x Damien pairing, well good luck...I'm not sure how you'd make that work.
Litwick and especially his evolutions remind me of Heartless from the Kingdom Hearts games.
Litwick and especially his evolutions remind me of Heartless from the Kingdom Hearts games.
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