Comment on AGENCY DAY 3 - Intro... pg3 by JediAnnSolo
No sassing intended at all. I love Sam monologuing about the impossibility of landsharks when there are 2 of them right behind him doing (what appears to be) an autopsy.
The lines could have been a bit more defined, but aside from that I can barely tell you rushed. Kudos!
The lines could have been a bit more defined, but aside from that I can barely tell you rushed. Kudos!
Right. I wasn't nearly as inspired when I wrote these lines. I originally wrote a draft that involved them talking over the body of Rufus, the mole rat from Kim Possible. It was at this point Annie reminded me Rufus was the land shark from Beyond Good and Evil, lol. I had completely forgotten what that shark's name was! Rewrites can be a killer sometimes.
Tell me about it. I'm rewriting an old Sonic fanfiction story of mine and it's painful to go through and change so much. Names, adding several paragraphs... etc.
Yeah. Forced writing is the worst. It feels wrong. Like grinding your teeth together. Without that inspiration, a writer just feels that something about his writing just isn't quite right.
and inspiration doesn't come easy to me. believe it.