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I was trying to emulate (som of) the style of (some of) Thus Spoke Zarathustra :)
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yea,but it reminds you of something from Greek Mythology,well to me anywayz. i like it alot
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Thanks :) What did you get out of it?
numbskulled00's avatar
you mean the meaning? or gist of it? now you know it will probably be somthing completely diff than what youentended it to say
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Haha, still, let me know :)
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ok you asked for it. it reminds me of that Beetles song 'Come Together'..he roller-coaster,he got early warning,he got muddy water he one mojo filter, he says, one and one and one is three,got to be good looking cause he's soo hard to see....
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cause the tone,metre sounds alot like that. it's meant as a compliment cause it's different from the normal rhyme of a poem and that makes it original and more catchy to me.