Comment on NaruHina Secret Lovers: Ch 2 by Kyoshi-M
I absolutely adore these chapters you've written. You did a really good job capturing both Hinata and Naruto's personalities. I can't stop reading these over and over! (please tell me you'll write more!)
Why thank you very much! I myself felt Naruto as a challenge, seeming as I'm used to using much more articulate narration, and Naruto is just...well Naruto xD
I'm glad to see you like reading my story over and over, that is actually quite flattering! i'm very happy you enjoy it so much
And of course I am writing more, chapter 3 is almost done, but since i'm a university student, and sometimes i dont feel inspired or get stuck, i have been taking too long
I released a snippet of the next chapter on my journal, its a bit of a trolling in the end but, the text is taken directly from the chapter except for the last two sentences (obviously) haha xD
thank you again!
K.
I'm glad to see you like reading my story over and over, that is actually quite flattering! i'm very happy you enjoy it so much
And of course I am writing more, chapter 3 is almost done, but since i'm a university student, and sometimes i dont feel inspired or get stuck, i have been taking too long
I released a snippet of the next chapter on my journal, its a bit of a trolling in the end but, the text is taken directly from the chapter except for the last two sentences (obviously) haha xD
thank you again!
K.
You're very welcome! I also really like how the story fits into the plot of the actual manga without messing it up. That's something I rarely see in fanfics. In fact, this really is the best NaruHina fanfic I have ever read. (I'm serious!) And don't worry, these are really worth waiting for.