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:iconavauntphotos:
i cannot wait to have poetry with u jd!

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:iconphr3ak000000000:
:wow: that was amazing. honestly :faint:

rest now, my beloved
fall upon ebony clouds
& ride the spiral down
down
down"


man, i sure miss your work this is beautiful.

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:iconchelsea-belle-06:
wow jd. youve done it again. another awesome poem.
this one tho.. i love it cuz when i read it i got all.. i dont know.. it made me feel peaceful.. i cant think of the word.. but yeah. you get the idea. i like it a lot :D

FAV!!
:iconavauntphotos:
i cannot wait to have poetry with u jd!
:iconbigjilmboognish:
Hey man, damn good poem... very flowing and peaceful.

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“NAKED Lunch -- a frozen moment when everyone sees what is on the end of every fork.”
~William S. Burroughs
«Boognishes. We build smiles.»
:iconrobidoux:
Gorgeous
Erotic and dreamy all at one....i want to read over and over again.

I love your first stanza - every letter of it. I wouldn't change a word.
:icondarkwolfj13:
Mmmm all mellow and relaxed ... I'm thinking you were aiming for something soft, sweet, and peacefull in this poam?? And thats what I felt. *going to drift lazily through the house*

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I have nothing to say, and yet I'm still talking....
:jedi: and you can't stop me..... :evillaugh:
:icongroovycamel:
Niiiccee Im listening to Gloria and I though of jooooo even though I dont even know jooooo

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Man is an animal.
But he is an animal which embodies God.
:iconyearningtofly:
beautiful

i'm going to fav it...just because i helped inspire it!! :|

it really is great though!!

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Poppies bleed petals of sheer excess. You and I, this sweet battleground.
:iconwomanofthepage:
Very, very nice...really like the abstract way of expressing feelings and sentiment -

"...in the pleasing morning tide
my muse hum’s delicate rhapsodies
quietly in my ear

rest now, my beloved
fall upon ebony clouds
& ride the spiral down
down
down.."

Beautiful!
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
thank you!! i love reading your comments.

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"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)

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