Comment on 5 Mistakes Young Writers Make by Droemar

Apr 29, 2010

Let us all pray at the mighty altar of wisdom that Droemar has once again revealed to us...thank you! I've been running a few of my main charries through the Mary Sue Litmus test, and it's all immensely helpful! And the tips are very useful! Anyways, I was wondering, do you ever edit writing? I'm not suggesting that I'm going to throw a few hundred first-draft novel-ish things into your inbox or anything (because that's fun, right? :eyeroll

, but it'd be helpful to get a character review, if you do.

Thanks again!
~LaughingFacade

Droemar

Apr 29, 2010

Character review? I'm not quite sure what that means, but I might be interested. The most I ever look at is the first five pages, because I can usually diagnose any problems from those. I can't take any right now, but if you've got a summary or a character template or something, I'd be willing to give some kind of feedback.

LaughingFacade

Apr 29, 2010

I guess by character review, I just mean searching for anomalies and things that are illogical. So yeah, like a character template

Would you mind if I sent you one so you could look it over?

Sure, go ahead.

Thanks very much! It'll take me a little while to put it together, but I should have it done by tomorrow morning at the latest