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*Barsine:iconBarsine: Oct 21, 2005, 4:55:38 AM
i love it ! it's very very "beautiful" !!!

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There's no time for hatred , only question
What is love ? Where is happiness ? What is life ? Where is peace ?
When will i find the strength to bring me release ?
-Jeff Buckley-

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~Ewok-with-Bird-Flu:iconEwok-with-Bird-Flu: Oct 3, 2005, 9:53:43 PM
wow, that was long.
very good, though. :)
nicely written.

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I might just lose my mind and rob a lace shop.
~hushed18:iconhushed18: Oct 4, 2005, 8:00:14 AM
AMAZING!
great job
it was such a wonderful idea and it was written beautifully
great job!
~Huggybear2155:iconHuggybear2155: Oct 4, 2005, 4:48:46 PM
thanks so very much :hug:

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You can laugh
A spineless laugh
We hope your rules and wisdom choke you
~Prince05:iconPrince05: Oct 4, 2005, 6:18:54 PM
it's great, just don't try to turn it into a song.

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who really looks underneath?
~Huggybear2155:iconHuggybear2155: Oct 4, 2005, 6:37:43 PM
hehe...this is one of the few i was planning not to

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You can laugh
A spineless laugh
We hope your rules and wisdom choke you
~Prince05:iconPrince05: Oct 4, 2005, 6:41:17 PM
i think you probably "could" turn it into a song but it's better this way.

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who really looks underneath?
~XunknownsoulX:iconXunknownsoulX: Oct 5, 2005, 12:37:50 PM
Wow! Very nicely written!

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One word frees us of all the weight and pain of life:

That word is love.


-Sophocles
~restricted213:iconrestricted213: Oct 5, 2005, 3:02:23 PM
Wow, ok critique.....critique.......fuck=P Got nothin. This sucks....but the poem doesn't! I really liked it (I'm sure you're sick of hearing that from me now=P)

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