kigents's avatar
Yeah, English isnt my first language. Yeah there are probably lots of grammar errors.

Sure it wouldnt hurt to correct errors.
Methemac's avatar
I could tell simply because the errors made weren't the usual errors made by writers, more like the errors made by foreign speakers. I speak portuguese as a second language, so I remember well what that's like. Congrats on writing a story in a different language. That's way hard to do, so give yourself a pat on the back.

I'll do the edit as soon as I can.
senlienz's avatar
Writing in a different language isn't hard. Writing in that language and not committing any mistakes, be they grammar or syntax, now THAT'S hard.

@kigents: I suggest you just open MSword (or any similar text editor with grammar check), copy/paste the whole thing and let it get the syntax done. As for grammar... well, English isn't my first language, but it's a matter of practice. Ask friends that DO have what language you're writing in to read it, just so they can point out any minor thing you might have missed.
I liked the text, though, it's easy to read. Keep it up.