Comment on Sunset Sequel Teaser by Ciroton
The unicorn if forced to pull off the road and into the woods as the dragon lets loose a belch of crimson fire that rushes up to the camera blocking sight of anything else.
-Small typo: should be "is" not "if".
Also, you should probably update this with a revised time of arrival... unless you derped and August was when you were going to start WRITING it, rather than when you are going to start POSTING it.
-Small typo: should be "is" not "if".
Also, you should probably update this with a revised time of arrival... unless you derped and August was when you were going to start WRITING it, rather than when you are going to start POSTING it.
