Comment on Vehicle Vector Tutorial by ~AdRoiT-Designs

ok wow!!! that was fantastic!!! the animation made such a difference to the tutorial. so much better than reading thru paragraphs of text as someone tries to explain what they mean!! wow.. only graphical downsides is i think the shine - which i dunno if u used white or not - needs to be duller. or maybe if u didnt use white, you might want to. it jsut seems a little dusty and hazy. the layout/graphics seem fine to me! tehy are simple but still look good. cept maybe hte bottom line that seperates the window and the controls. i think a basic straight line would be fine... maybe with a shadow underneath and highight on top would be good, so that it looks like it rolls in a bit on the line (like partlines in products). jsut subtle. i think as is its a bit over done. other than that its so sweet. oh also few spell, grammatic mistakes, ill tell u em so its easy to fix...
1. Step 3 - "...use your discretion, If it looks..." (comma then capital i)
2. Step 6 (and others) - you sais 'u' instead of you. I dunno if your teacher cares but yeh, jsut incase u did it naturally... ahah as i just did.
Hmm i thouught tehre were more haha oh well. Im not trying to nit pick jsut i know how much it helps when ppl do the spell check for me
I love the tangetial curve popup by the way

Oh a nother couple of graphic things. i think MAYBE (cant tell till i see it) the shines on the big botton should be bigger... so its closer to the edge. like .25 of a mm
and i think it would help if the step lit up depending on where u r. oh i spose it says the steps down the bottom hmm meh itd prob just be easier for the user imo.

i may have picked out the negatives but ti think this is mad, as a tutorial let alone and interactive tutorial!! well done matey.

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