Comment on Equestrian Knights Chapter 3 by Solaris90

i have read it! and loved it.

i apologize on my bad explanation. but i do get the references, and love them.
i really wish i could explain it, and im no position to complain either, but it's like the story got rushed? or the pace?
the story feels wierd.
don't get me wrong here, this is now one of my favourite stories out there.
but in these last 2 chapters the feeling you had in the other chapters feels so distant.
i bet it's just me overthinking things.
please keep writing like you allways have and i'll be looking forward to reading whatever you write!
lot's of love! <3