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~mysticsilverstar:iconmysticsilverstar: Nov 18, 2005, 10:31:35 PM
wow...i can feel the emotion in this...especially in the last few lines...i love those....but yea, it can be polished a bit here and there. cuz some bits dun feel like they flow properly. but other than that, i think it's great! :hug: luv ya hun :heart:

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Sisters Not By Blood
But Of Souls We Share
Our Hearts Beats Together As One
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~mysticsilverstar:iconmysticsilverstar: Nov 18, 2005, 10:31:35 PM
wow...i can feel the emotion in this...especially in the last few lines...i love those....but yea, it can be polished a bit here and there. cuz some bits dun feel like they flow properly. but other than that, i think it's great! :hug: luv ya hun :heart:

--
Soul Sisters Of The Sisterhood
Sisters Not By Blood
But Of Souls We Share
Our Hearts Beats Together As One
*Silverstar*
--
---> ~thestraightedgers <---
----> ~Emotional-Writings <----
-----> *burn-p0etry <-----
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