Comment on Kaernk and Hazel by TamamaDesu
Really nice 
I love how she is looking at him, with a bit of curiosity 
The atmosphere is nice, but I think more shadows would make it even deeper... Maybe a candle or oil lamp standing near would add some vibe?
I love how she is looking at him, with a bit of curiosity The atmosphere is nice, but I think more shadows would make it even deeper... Maybe a candle or oil lamp standing near would add some vibe? 
Thank you! ♥
I actually tried to think out a place where I could put
a candle/lantern or even a torch on the wall. But the wall
is too low to the ground to have a visible torch, and I just
couldn't find any good spot to place the lantern/candle. D:
I tried to give this as much shadows/darkness as possible,
but if I made this darker, the characters themselves wouldn't be very visible.
I think it all depends on each persons light and contrast of their screen, since
we all see it a bit different from each other. C: To me it's already too dark. D:
♥I actually tried to think out a place where I could put
a candle/lantern or even a torch on the wall. But the wall
is too low to the ground to have a visible torch, and I just
couldn't find any good spot to place the lantern/candle. D:
I tried to give this as much shadows/darkness as possible,
but if I made this darker, the characters themselves wouldn't be very visible.
I think it all depends on each persons light and contrast of their screen, since
we all see it a bit different from each other. C: To me it's already too dark. D:
Maybe suggesting source of light somewhere out the pic, for example, on the wall over their heads? Not everything must be visible. And contrasting shadows on their faces would look great 
The contrast beetween light (only near to candle/lamp) and darkness (everywhere else) is very important in Amnesia and really make this atmosphere
Not everything must be visible. And contrasting shadows on their faces would look great The contrast beetween light (only near to candle/lamp) and darkness (everywhere else) is very important in Amnesia and really make this atmosphere
I tried a tiny bit with the "source-of-light" thing by the end of Hazel's
dress, like she's keeping a candle or something a bit away from her. But idk
if that made a big diff. As I said earlier, the contrast of colours look diff
to each and everyone's computer monitor. So it might not show as much to you
as it is to me. But thank you for the advice/constructive critisism! C:
dress, like she's keeping a candle or something a bit away from her. But idk
if that made a big diff. As I said earlier, the contrast of colours look diff
to each and everyone's computer monitor. So it might not show as much to you
as it is to me. But thank you for the advice/constructive critisism! C:
No problem my dear