(Just a note: You said here, not her at the end. Small edit, luckily! (Assuming you want to take the time to fix it. I know that *I've* chose to ignore small stuff like that because of time! XD)
Anyhoof, great job! The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor looks forward to the future episodes!
Anyhoof, great job! The GREAT and POWERFUL Trevor looks forward to the future episodes!
Oh, and you don't have to look too forward to future chapters, since they're all posted. ^^ 4 in total, and a pic.
Oh, okay! I see that you have other stories though, so now I have to keep reading after ch. 4! XD
Well, this and Applecores and Rainbows are shipping. Applecores and Rainbows is also still being made, though I'm releasing chapters pretty frequent. ^^
Mistakes of the Past, however, is a grimdark work. So, you might want to avoid it. Or not, I guess. Whichever you prefer! XP
Mistakes of the Past, however, is a grimdark work. So, you might want to avoid it. Or not, I guess. Whichever you prefer! XP
Well... Grimdark to what extent? Like death of the Mane six, or just blood and depression?
Well, I can't spoil much, but there is death. And blood and depression. Personally, I feel like a horrible person for the ideas still bubbling in my head with this story. XD BUT I REGRET NOTHING!
GOOD! Never regret what you've typed! Though I'll probably avoid it. I was crushed by the ending of 'Of Mares and Magic', because of the sad ending, and that Trixie was OOC for what she learned. So I would probably not be able to take a Grimdark story...
Many can't. My friend, the one that proofread this story, isn't the kind to handle Grimdark. Says it'll spoil the show, and I can understand. I can easily keep fiction and, well, other fiction separate, though, and I find a little darkness every so often makes the light all the brighter. ^^ If it's any consolation, I tend to end the story on a positive note, if not exactly the brightest positive. Things will be lost, but not all, I suppose.
THANK YOU! I try to fix whatever problems there are, but I can easily miss them in a reread. It's sort of a problem when you wrote the story, you can easily get caught up in it since you know the direction. >.> I really appreciate you telling me. I'll fix it now. ^^
NP! I saw some others in previous chapters, like an it's misused in... Ch 1 near the beginning, I think, but I try not to mention things like that, because it annoys a LOT of people. I'm... I WISH I could write better, but I just don't have that talent. I mean, I have TONS and TONS of stories in my head, but I just can't express them... And now I'm sidetracked again! XD I do that a lot. If you ever want someone to help proof-read for grammar and stuff, just shoot it to me in a note, okay? I've pre-read for many people at this point, so... If you ever want, just lemme know, okay?
All right! I appreciate the offer.
Yep!