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Another thing. during the events Her mother gave her a gift. It was known as the Fusion Bow which shoots fire,ice,thunder, and regular arrows. Forget to mention about one thing About Hilbert which that Hilda likes about him. Hilbert rarely shows cowardness. Which is why he has the crest of courage. That all I have. Hope you like and enjoyed them. Have a nice day.
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Hilda: A 15 year girl who lives on a ship with her mother and brother. Plus her crew. At first she didn't like Hilbert but as it progress she deeply cares about him. When she was revealed to be the white maiden. She apoligize to Hilbert for all the events that happened to him and his sister. Both she and Hilbert have a crest. she has the wisdom. While he has the courage.
Hilda: A 15 year girl who lives on a ship with her mother and brother. Plus her crew. At first she didn't like Hilbert but as it progress she deeply cares about him. When she was revealed to be the white maiden. She apoligize to Hilbert for all the events that happened to him and his sister. Both she and Hilbert have a crest. she has the wisdom. While he has the courage.