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I think it will look better once more content is added to the middle area and it fills out more. All the visual weight is on the upper right, one possible idea would be to add that green leaf treatment to the bottom right. Not as big though, but there.

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Wow looks brilliant...very very impressive :)
thats insane dude, keep it up.

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At first sight, this template is really nice looking as usual.
You sound not sure about this one, maybe try to focus on your content, by adding some text on the main part, that would give it a more structured look ? Or maybe just add a very light grey on the central part to make it less floating.... but still an amazing template as usual ! :D
Indeed - I really like this template especially the transparency effect over the grey bar is a nice idea! Keep it up! :)

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I think it does look a bit disordered, there are too many different elements. They say that you shouldn't have more than seven different elements on the screen at once, because people's ultra short time memory can only hold seven things at once. Or something like that. I think it's a good rule of thumb no matter the reasoning.

The left part of the site looks very nice, I like the zebra and the body text part. I'd either like to see more of the lovely green or perhaps make the whole site black and white to go with the zebra theme. The leaves look good, but I'm not sure if they fit in with the rest. Do you need the text "Selection" or the "Online image" one?

I don't really like the Home button and the larger buttons don't appeal to me at all, they just look awkwardly huge, even confusing. I'd ditch the rectangle around them. The smaller buttons are just fine. The placement of the Search field looks strange to me, even though it's easy to locate. In general I think the design is too ambiguous, it's not clear to me which parts are clickable and what do they do. What does the More button do, for example?
looks cool. What font is that?

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Thanks a lot for pointing that out, I'll give your idea try.
Thank you, glad you like it.

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