Comment on Grimoire Chapter One: Inceptum by Sir-Jayke
A watch, a llama, a favourite and a comment? Well good madam I think you've just a smile on my face. I hope dearly that you read the rest and let me know what you think. As for the spacing issue well I've never noticed that and neither has anyone else who's read my work. I think that may just be a 'you' thing. Still I'll see what I can do about it, if anything.
Might I ask how you came across my work?
Might I ask how you came across my work?
I usually find spacing a problem, because of my eyes (so it is a me problem! 
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Thanks im glad i put a smile on your face, i found your work on some writing group
(i belong to so many I lose track, I think it was The writers meow
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I was really drawn in by the name grimoire as my novel has my character with her grimoire ^^~
I'll be reading the reast of your chapters right now, so I'll try to give you thorough comments
)Thanks im glad i put a smile on your face, i found your work on some writing group
(i belong to so many I lose track, I think it was The writers meow
)I was really drawn in by the name grimoire as my novel has my character with her grimoire ^^~
I'll be reading the reast of your chapters right now, so I'll try to give you thorough comments
Thanks so much. I love feedback, it just makes my day. If you'd like me to take a look at your novel I'd be glad to return the favour.
Really? thankyou- its not very good but heres the link: [link]