thelovelypenguin's avatar
A Family Oath? This sounds interesting. All in all, not a bad chapter. Although I must say, Ditzy's nonsense dialogue is rather annoying to me (it's not necessarily anything you did in the story; I've just never liked it in general, when anyone uses it). I know that's part of her character in this story (with justification, too), so I'll just keep quiet about it otherwise. But yeah, lookin' forward to checking out the next part.
Solaris90's avatar
Okay. Sorry for that. :( Honestly, I've always been a bit annoyed by it as well. I really do prefer Derpy who's not mentally-challenged, just a bit clumsy or eccentric. Oh well.