Aye, eyes are the one thing I kinda failed at. Got carried away with Soi Fon and Hollow, in the end Sunsnap really looks out of her place, and the her sight isn't focused where it should be doesn't help the matter at all. I corrected her overall look many times, yet I, for some reason, left her like this.. Propably got carried away again during the final touches.
But yes, I intended her to look half-dead and stuff since she's just ran for her life through a forest, puked on herself, passed out once and whatnot. Yet I always tend to go and.. exaggerate things
Thank you for being the first, and this far the only one here to give some kind of criticism