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Pony POV Series Fluttershy FlutterCruel Pearls
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alexwarlorn
alexwarlorn
Jun 8, 2012
Using averting rather than advert.
The reflection took on that same 'wrong kind of playful' expression and pose again. <- Since 'took' is in past tense, 'pose' should be 'posed'
It just doesn't SOUND RIGHT when I read it out loud.
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