Comment on Dash test by BionicleGahlok

Oh, no, I'm not trying to make it look stylized, it's just a rough lineart. This was just to get some feedback on the overall idea, so it's like a sketch. The final one will have clean lines, and better shading.
And I think the lack of a smoother transition in the shading you mentioned is because of her wing's shadow. At least that's what I think you're referring to.