Comment on The Rainbow's Surprise Chap 3 by jake-heritagu
Okay...in an effort to get some creative feedback going between the two of us here...XD
Marriage! FTW!
This is seriously epic! I can't tell you how many times the threat of a D'aaawww was on the verge of breaking out. xD The way you've built up the content of this chapter over the past two and then released it all here with one well thought out, and seriously twisting and turning plot twist type loopy loop just played so well to the ship man, it was just too epic.
This is one ship that I don't see sinking for any reason, and it's all due to the way you built it up. Normally, I don't really care for shipping. (It typically costs way too much for the size of the package you're tryin...right. Wrong shipping...>.>) But in all seriousness, I can totally see this working out in plot with the actual show. You've nailed it, good sir!
Marriage! FTW!
This is seriously epic! I can't tell you how many times the threat of a D'aaawww was on the verge of breaking out. xD The way you've built up the content of this chapter over the past two and then released it all here with one well thought out, and seriously twisting and turning plot twist type loopy loop just played so well to the ship man, it was just too epic.This is one ship that I don't see sinking for any reason, and it's all due to the way you built it up. Normally, I don't really care for shipping. (It typically costs way too much for the size of the package you're tryin...right. Wrong shipping...>.>) But in all seriousness, I can totally see this working out in plot with the actual show. You've nailed it, good sir!