Comment on Shrike - Study II by Griatch-art
VERY VERY good work!
Not much of a painter, but, there are two things I have questions about as far as a critique is concerned. First, is her lower lip supposed to be two shades darker than her upper lip? (not knowing the storyline I'm not criticizing, just wondering, because I looked at the first pic and her lips were the same shade there) Second, (and this is fairly minor) are her eyes supposed to be so dark I can't tell what color they are?
Not criticizing, just asking questions, because this is MUCH MUCH better than I can do digitally. So, this is to not detract from the pic at all, because it is AWESOME!
Not much of a painter, but, there are two things I have questions about as far as a critique is concerned. First, is her lower lip supposed to be two shades darker than her upper lip? (not knowing the storyline I'm not criticizing, just wondering, because I looked at the first pic and her lips were the same shade there) Second, (and this is fairly minor) are her eyes supposed to be so dark I can't tell what color they are?
Not criticizing, just asking questions, because this is MUCH MUCH better than I can do digitally. So, this is to not detract from the pic at all, because it is AWESOME!
It's a good point about the lips, I made them more of a similar colour now. The effect was actually pretty cool I guess, but not really what I intended, thanks for pointing it out. 
The eyes are very dark, but I did add some splotches of brown to them to hopefully make them slightly clearer (I could see the colour in them before too though, maybe my monitor is brighter?). Hopefully better now, at any rate!
Thanks for the comment and feedback, most useful!
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Griatch
The eyes are very dark, but I did add some splotches of brown to them to hopefully make them slightly clearer (I could see the colour in them before too though, maybe my monitor is brighter?). Hopefully better now, at any rate!Thanks for the comment and feedback, most useful!
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Griatch
Welcome! I was just wondering about the lips cause they caught my eye.
And not seeing the eyes right may be my tiny laptop screen's fault, If I had a larger screen it might have been OK. Don't know.
And you're welcome!
And not seeing the eyes right may be my tiny laptop screen's fault, If I had a larger screen it might have been OK. Don't know.
And you're welcome!