ApolloStudios's avatar
Very nice! I dont mean to be a kill joy, but maybe you started off a little too quickly for your characters (in the romance I mean) and you could try to describe Galan a bit better, but still it was very good. I enjoyed reading it!
Stephonika-W-Kaye's avatar
Thank you for your input! I was thinking of going back and describing Galan more. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment. ^_^ As far as the romance, you may be right. I may need to include more of seeing Galan and who he is before she comes into his life.
ApolloStudios's avatar
By the way, your TP novel is also very interesting, and I like how you put in your own ideas. Are you thinking of making another LoZ novel after this one or are you going to finish this story. Either way is totally fine :)
Stephonika-W-Kaye's avatar
Well, I want to do both, actually, thank you for reading and asking. But yes, I want to finish TP and also this original novel, which is actually a series of 4 books I've planned, and I've played around with the thought of doing another LOZ, perhaps OOT or LTTP. What I would love is to be able to get licensing to publish my Zelda work through Nintendo and be their sort of novelist I guess you could say. THAT would be the coolest. ^_^