Comment on Merely a Mare, 5th Interlude: Loss by EbonMane
Well, now I'M back. Good god Season 2 has killed my enthusiasm for ponies. I still watch and enjoy, but I've found no way to get back into the fandom, I've stopped reading fics and everything. Now I come back, start from the beginning of this one, and I'm loving it and can't stop reading.
Might have something to do with the lack of Season 2, but I'm pretty sure it has more to do with your fantastic writing.
This was beautifully written. I know I say that about every chapter, but I always mean it. The graveyard was described in such detail that I couldn't help but see it vividly in my mind (which happens surprisingly little, considering how much fiction I read. You've made it happen twice in one story (the other time being the apple made light show prank).
Now, onward to the next chapter!
Might have something to do with the lack of Season 2, but I'm pretty sure it has more to do with your fantastic writing.
This was beautifully written. I know I say that about every chapter, but I always mean it. The graveyard was described in such detail that I couldn't help but see it vividly in my mind (which happens surprisingly little, considering how much fiction I read. You've made it happen twice in one story (the other time being the apple made light show prank).
Now, onward to the next chapter!